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For me, "So Late in the Day" lands better than "Late in the Day." The "So" adds to the wistful, melancholy feel of the title.

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Can we just keep adding words? How about

So late in the wrong day

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To me, "So Late in the Day" has a kind of poetry. Adding more words would take away from it. But this is all so subjective, somebody else may feel differently.

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Different vibe - a comedy perhaps?

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And almost foreshadows "Too..."

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