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“Rising” seems to be a tension upon emotions, which deserves more violence, danger, comedic buildup, etc. Repetition of the same word seems to remove the tension. Am I missing something?

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Yes! repetition made the meaning insistent. I found that too. And the heart of the story was revealed, for me.

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I gotta look at that more deeply.

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