You have nicely captured the gestures--the unspoken anguish, grief, and hope in this story. I'll add, too, that the gun was a cast off gun. And a side note: I wondered about the larger context of this story set in a world where accidents like this one surely weren't (sadly so) uncommon.
You have nicely captured the gestures--the unspoken anguish, grief, and hope in this story. I'll add, too, that the gun was a cast off gun. And a side note: I wondered about the larger context of this story set in a world where accidents like this one surely weren't (sadly so) uncommon.
You have nicely captured the gestures--the unspoken anguish, grief, and hope in this story. I'll add, too, that the gun was a cast off gun. And a side note: I wondered about the larger context of this story set in a world where accidents like this one surely weren't (sadly so) uncommon.